Category Archives: Grading

Peer Review Comment

For my Peer Review Comment, I reviewed asinnersthoughts on food! I have left a comment on the original post and below is a copy.

“The main point of this contribution is found in this sentence “…it can cause a lot of shock onto your body because it is not the same nutrients”.

From reading this contribution I learned a lot about you. I personally think it takes a lot of strength and discipline to carry out this lifestyle and it would be very tough for me to change my entire eating habits to become a vegetarian. I am also relieved to know that I am not the only one with the common misconception of justifying all carb loaded foods because “I’m not eating any meat products”.

It would be good for a college student to read this contribution because some of us, including myself, think that being a vegetarian is only eating vegetables, however, you mentioned that you also eat pastas and bread which honestly never crossed my mind. I am also glad that you touched on the moderation subject because usually, most people think you’re really healthy because you are a vegetarian but like you said “I justified eating all of these” … (unhealthy foods) … “under the idea that it was in moderation and that there was no meat in the meal.”

The strongest part of this contribution, to me, was the part where you said, “I feel like this is a concept that we as consumers are not super familiar with and that’s why moderation becomes a back-burner concept to a lot of us.” It’s true, I think that everyone falls guilty of practicing moderation and most of us don’t even entirely know the proper way of it.

Something that someone my question about this contribution is when you said “I am a vegetarian and that can go wrong very quickly.” A few questions that could arise are:

How could being a vegetarian go wrong very quickly? Does this have to do with health? Money? Habits?

Aside from this, this post was generally good and easy to read and understand.

I did find a couple grammar errors which I’m sure were just you trying to type as fast as you could so you wouldn’t forget your thoughts (me all the time). They were both in the first paragraph, the first one came from this sentence “I did wanted to exceed those limits.” (want rather than wanted), and the second came from the following sentence: “Now that I am adult…” (Now that I am an adult…).

Your section on being a vegetarian made me want to read more on this topic. Maybe for the new year I could try it out (not sure how long it would last) but I am sure that there are healthier alternatives to eating meat (I mostly just eat chicken or seafood… so maybe I’m kind of almost there? Probably… not really…)

On a 1 to 4 scale where 1 is the lowest possible and 4 is the highest possible, I rate this contribution a 4 overall, because you answered the prompt in a clear and concise way, and made it personal. I hope that you have been able to practice moderation cautiously like you wanted to!”

 

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Grades and comments so far…

Hi folks – I have posted a space in Canvas, “Comments re performance to date,” that will show comments and a current grade for your work so far, according to the holistic grading rubric. (Note that “so far” is through what I SAW for you as of Oct 16….) If you do NOT yet see that I have added that space for you, do not fret. (And please be patient just a bit longer, as in until about this weekend. I am slowly – and with ENJOYMENT and value – reading your work, and enjoying getting to take that time.)

I am seeing some quite thoughtful posts, btw. For those who have NOT yet posted a Glossary Building post, it’s time to start, just a heads up…. Oh, and the GB posts I’m seeing tend to show me the learning that happens when we go after a new-to-us concept or term. Exciting! So do it….

Btw, the green checkmark in your Canvas space indicates that I am complete, so far, with your comments/grade. YOU may be missing one or more items, which you should be able to check against what’s due so far (in other words, if you did NOT yet do even one GB post, you know that.) Similarly, if you have done something, and you don’t believe I’ve seen it, make a note of it. Usually that will be because you neglected to UNcheck the UNcategorized category, or you used a category that made it look like it was for one prompt when really it was for another (or titled your post in some way that confused me, or something like that).

Another heads up – although you won’t see things “marked off” in that comments re performance space, I do have a “check-off” column for each prompt in an excel. If you DO believe your current grade doesn’t look as though it reflects what you’ve done, let me know.

Cheers, enjoy the rest of your week, and keep exploring, learning, and writing. Oh, and make ONE healthy consumer choice in the next few days – whether modifying a choice you’d typically make, or deciding something entirely new for your life. Why not? You can do it. –Dr. P