Peer Review

In review of bcwu’s post on Thinking and Discourse:

I learned from this post that nutrition for your child shouldn’t stop being a top priority once they are able to make their own decisions in grade school. It would be good for a new parent to read this because they should be aware of all their choices as a consumer that should tailor specifically to their child. The strongest part of this post would be the emphasis on how children aren’t able to look after their own health (something some parents seem to not understand) I understood this post loud and clear, and didn’t find any typos or spelling errors. I would like to read more on this topic about the harmful chemicals that may be found in dishware for kids. I rate this contribution a 4, because babies are our future!!

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