Final Project Review

I will be leaving a review for asinnersthoughts final project.

I believe that the main point of this contribution is found in this sentence, “Trying to be healthy should not mean that it has to be expensive either.” From reading this contribution I learned that being healthy doesn’t mean you must spend a lot of money on groceries. I can still have a budget-friendly list of healthy items. It would be good for families, people trying to go on a diet, and even college students to read this contribution because it can bring an idea for those who want to make the first step into being healthy. The strongest part of this contribution is consumers should think about their health and be cautious how they spend their money. It is the strongest contribution because it brings up a good point that consumers should be aware of prices of healthy meals and possibly get a better deal somewhere else. The weakest part of this contribution is when she states that you get hungry after shopping for an hour at the grocery store. It seems like this is irrelevant information. One part I had to read more than once to understand it is the final picture because it is very blurred out and hard to read. I found one typo in the 11th sentence, second paragraph, where she said ‘what’ instead of ‘want.’ One part that made me want to read more on this topic is how budget friendly can I get when it comes to eating healthy. On a 1 to 4 scale where 1 is the lowest possible and a 4 is the highest possible, I rate this contribution a 3 overall because the topic was very good but because of the last picture is quite blurry to read made it drop 1 point.

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